a song i wrote to all my born different people :) BLUEMAN

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a song i wrote to all my born different people :) BLUEMAN

Postby blue man » Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:23 am

Hello everyone here

this is something I wrote in 10 minutes, i posted here before but now i've changed a little bit, I want to include it in the book, please Could anyone check it and tell me if it makes sense and what you think I need some feedback, thank you in advance

Written by: ( blue man)
Song: Born different

we’re not the same
born different, with a slight change
no need to feel strange
nothing to be ashamed of
born fighters full of bravery and love
I'm not the same
made like this for a reason, from the man up above

real talk....

My rhymes is for the sick and depressed
the lost and lonely
mentally and heavily stressed
drinking by my lonely, I’m a walking book with a deep story waiting for my young to come hold me
the only love that’s unconditional and pure
I’ve thought my peers cared bout me, but now I’m not sure
I’ve tried pretending being healthy, but I’d rather stay true to me I was born with CHD ASD or VSD small mitral valve
When I first heard it, damn it broke my world in half
I walk around with a condition that’s hard to see
Most folks won’t tell the difference looking at me
but back to the sad bit mad bit that will leave you hooked
my soul wants to die but my heart wants to try so I’m spooked
feeling like nothing has been done, the Cipralex stopped working so I’m back to square one
back to drinking cider staring at the sun
Life’s dull behind close doors no fun
Plus being agoraphobic makes it worse
10 years old and I’m already putting change on mom’s purse
Maybe The creator made me like this for a purpose
never the type to share my problems so consider this a big step
telling folks about my deep personal sh*t
to all my B.D.P approach a brother with love, and never forget


we’re not the same
born different, with a slight change
no need to feel strange
nothing to be ashamed of
born fighters full of bravery and love
I’m not the same
made like this for a reason, from the man up above



I’d like to think God made me different for a reason
lucky and grateful to be alive enjoying hot season
even though I’m struggling breathing
but I’m thankful for still living
enjoying my living years with my loved ones
special ones, watching daughters and sons
not dying or on the run
so forgive me if I’ve always seem to complain
and release bad vibes and thoughts from my brain
I know there are far worse people going through more pain
major change like changing lanes is not that strange
that we’re not all the same
So don’t feel like you’re weird or insane
I know my struggle is forever, but I’m used to this game



we’re not the same
born different, with a slight change
no need to feel strange
nothing to be ashamed of
born fighters full of bravery and love
I’m not the same,
made like this for a reason, from the man up above


My brothers and sisters don’t be afraid or shy to show your scars
you are fighter, God loves you just the way you are
we’ve been through so much we should be writers
the stress is heavy but writing this makes it lighter
Sentiments for me and you, cause you and I share something so deep and true
principally since we’ve had the same procedures and born blue
mine is small mitral valve hypo plastic va discordance ASD most commonly knows as VSD
Diagnosed with CHD
or better yet hole in the heart
very complex, you don’t have to hide in the dark
Used to get me tired and vex when I couldn’t play with the other kids in the park
But now I join in like is a friendly all Welcome Park
Thanks to my exceptional cardiologists for mending my heart


Now I come to the light, you’re not a freak of nature
everything is all right, nobody is perfect is just the way of nature
so remember me when you’re listening to this song
you’re not on your own, you’re not weakling you’re brave and strong
and there's nothing wrong
is just the way we was born


we’re not the same
born different, with a slight change
no need to feel strange
nothing to be ashamed of
born fighters full of bravery and love
I’m not the same
made like this for a reason, from the man up above

i have also made a track i'm thinking of selling on itunes or amazon and give some money to the children in hospital wards the parents of terminal ill children

great ormond street and the the heart hospital the one i go for my annual check ups :)

thank you all for looking :) and happy new year
blue man
 
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Postby Arman » Mon Jan 31, 2011 10:11 pm

:) :D WOW! That is great!
Everything we feel so well put into words that anyone could read, listen to, empathise with and enjoy!
THANK YOU :wink: :P 8)
dextracardia
right BT shunt 1981
TCPC 1992
Single right ventricle
ventricular septal defect
pulmonary stenosis
leak from aortic valve
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Postby Sarah_Louise » Tue Feb 01, 2011 2:22 pm

That's fantastic :D
Well done xx
18, Truncus arteriosus type 2 & Large VSD, 4 OHS:
1.Re-plumb of heart & VSD closure
2.Conduit pipe replacement
3&4.Aortic valve replacment
5.Pericutaneous pulm valve replacement
2 Embolectomies, strokes
clots on lungs, heart, legs & brain
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Postby Skaliakbar » Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:21 pm

cool great ...
Kulsoom
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